Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Synopsis for fifth business



Fifth Business  

Author: Robertson Davies

Setting: Deptford Canada, Europe, other places in Canada

Plot:  An old man has retired and feels that his retirement party and the offerings of him poorly reflect him as a person and his work. His story begins when he was a little boy in Deptford. His friend throws a snowball at him. He ducks it and it hits a pregnant woman, Mary Dempster, she than goes into labor. Paul is very premature and Mary had a very difficult birth. However booth survives by some miracle. Ramsy has to care for Mrs. Dempster. He begins to fall in love with her, much to display of his mother and his classmates.  His classmates begin to distance themselves from him. Eventually Mrs. Dempster has sex with a tramp. She reforms him, which Dunny later sees as a miracle. Dunny’s older brother falls ill and dies. He runs and gets Mary. She prays over him and saves him. This is seen as her scond miracle. He soon joins the army to escape the embarrassment of Mrs. Demptser. While there he shoots out a tank nest. During this incident he loses his legs. He also sees a sculpture of the virgin Mary.  He sees Mary Dempster. He views this as her third miracle. He loses conscsness and when he wakes up he is the hospital where he meets Diana. He learns that his parents have died and his brother had died. He also wins a V.C.  Dunstan returns to Canada and becomes a scholar. He learns of fool-saints and of Percy boys marriage to a girl he liked. He travles to Europe with Leola and Boy  mostly for the ride. Their he runs into some Jesuits, and he makes friends with one of them. He becomes an expert in saints. He returns to Deptford to find Mary. Soon the depression hits. Boy becomes very wealthy. Dunny goes to see Mary almost every day. Leisel soon dies of pneumonia and Dunny suspects that she had something to do with her own death.   Dunny soon goes to a magic show in Mexico show. There he discovers that Paul dempster is the Magician. Here he meets Liesel.  Who is ugly but is wise. One night he sees Lesiel and a girl that he finds to be attractive kissing. Liesiel comes to his room which makes him mad, he then brutally attcks her. She later tells him that she wanted to relive his anger. He returns to Canada and tells May he has found Paul. She suffers severe trauma. She later dies from this. Soon Paul comes to Canada. Dunny introduces Paul to boy. Then shows them the rock that caused Mary to go into labor. After both men leave Dunny realizes that the stone is gone. He goes to Paul’s show. Someone comes in and says that Boy is dead. No one knows who killed him. Then Dunny has a heart attack.

Characters

Dunny- The main character. Never really does anything for himself. Is fifth business. Dunny is just a player in other peoples game. Carries the weight of the world on his shoulders.

Boy- Throws the rock that ruined Mary.  He is from a wealthy family and becomes very wealthy. He marries Leola, but I am not positive that he really loved her. In the end he is either murdered or he commits suicide.

Paul- Is much younger than Dunny is. He becomes a talented magician. Possibly kills Boy.

Mary- Paul’s mother. Dunny’s  fool saint. Her three miracles are reforming the tramp, saving Dunny’s brother and appearing to Dunny as the virgin Mary.

Liesiel – is Paul’s assistant is extermly ugly but is wise beyond her years.

Point of view- Ramsy is his own story teller. He is of course bias but he seems to bias against himself in a way. I don’t think he is very reliable. He has lots of emotion and views himself negatvly.

Tone- Ramsy accepts himself as fifth business. Ramsy os negative and thoughtful of his past.

Imagery- There is lots of imagery. A very good image is when Boy throws the snowball. You can feel the terror. You can see the snowball being thrown. You can feel the tensions.

Symbolism- This is hard because I have not done a second read. The stone is  possibly a symbol for the beginning and end.



Memorable quotes

“He was killed by the usual cabal: by himself, first of all; by the women he knew ; by the women he did not know ; by the man who granted his inmost  wish ; and by the inevitable fifth who was the keeper of his conscience and keeper of the stone.”  This is important because it simplifies the human to condtion to five people. You could probably write an entire essay just on this one quote.

“In making this report to you, my dear Headmaster, I have purposely begun with the birth of Paul Dempster, because this is the cause of so much that is to follow.” This is important because it shows him blaming basically his life on Paul’s birth. It may also illustrate that humans make their situation what they want. 

Theme:

Humanity is the author of its own story.

How we know: Throughout the novel  Dunny argues that your role is relevant to your perspective and because Humans often contribute miracles to God but they often come from the human Psyche.






synopsis of American Dream



American Dream

Author: Edward Elbee

Setting: in some apartment in some none descript suburban place. Probably in the 195os or 60s.

Plot: At the opening of the play Mommy and Daddy are complaining about how they are late. Mommy begins to recount how she almost bought a beige hat but was stopped by the leader of her women’s club and was informed that it was in fact a wheat color hat. Mommy and the women get into a frugal argument about the real color of the hat. Mommy says she cannot get satisfaction. At this point Grandma comes in with wrapped boxes. Grandma complains about being old. At this point we find out that Grandma and Mommy were very poor. Because Mommy married Daddy she is now rich. At this point Grandma tells about how Mommy and Daddy murdered their adoptive son’ who happened to be a twin. At this point the other twin comes in.  Mommy suggests incest and Grandma quickly ends the play.

I need to make a note about the relationship of Mommy and Daddy, Although Daddy makes the money Mommy seems to control the household and the pocketbook. This is swapping of the traditional roles of the women and the man.

Mommy- Controls the pocketbook controls the household. Grew up poor her mother implies that she Married Daddy for his money and not because she loved him.  Perhaps is a gold digger

Daddy- has become DE masculinized booth literally and fugitively. Obviously has a lot of money but does not have much ambition.  Mommy controls his ambitions.  I think he loves Mommy in a strange and unique way.

Grandma- is the only with any hope of sanity. She is a really actress because she pretends to be insane. She is also afraid that she will be kicked out and forced to live in an old folks home. She also complains a lot about being old.

Mrs.Barker-is the  leader of Mommy’s women’s club. She is also the head of the adoption agency. She is not very observant because she has allowed Mommy and Daddy to adopt another child even after they have killed their son. She is very busy.

The young man- Mommy and Daddy killed his twin. Since then he has been stripped of his emotions and cannot feel anything.

Point of view- The narrator is Grandma.  While she is the most reliable character she has a very strong bias against her own daughter. She is somewhat unreliable

Tone- Grandma is angry and frustrated at Mommy and the way her life has turned out.

Imagery- One very strong image is the image of Mommy buying her hat. Another image is of Grandma packing her stuff

Symbolism- Ok. Sparknotes says there is no symbols however I disagree. I think that Grandma is a symbol of old ways. I think that Mommy is a symbol of the new feminine. I think the boxes are a symbol of the American Dream.

Memorable quotes

“I no longer have the capacity to feel anything. I have no emotions. I have been drained, torn asunder disemboweled. I have, now, only my person, my body, my face. I use what I have I let people love me I accept the syntax around me, for while I know I cannot relate; I know I must be related to.” This is a quote from the young man. This is literally about the American dream but it is a bring down of the new dream.

“WHAT a masculine Daddy! Isn't he a masculine Daddy?” This is ironic because this statement comes when Daddy is following one of the countless orders from Mommy and actually demonstrates how little of a “man” he really is.

Theme

The theme is that the American dream is absurd.

How we know: Title is American dream. Mommy and Daddy strive to accomplish this ridiculous dream and end up miserable.  

Synopsis Ceremony



Ceremony

Author: Leslie Marmon Silko

Setting: Laguna settlement, outside Laguna settlement, Japan, directly after WW2

Plot: After returning from war Tayo arrives at his home in Laguna.  He discovers that there has been a drought. He is also suffering from severe PTSD because he was a POW and because he witnessed his cousin brother’s death. Upon returning he also has discovered that his uncle father has died in a mysterious way probably related to dehydration or overworking or stress or a combination.  Tayo is also suffering from Malaria.  All the native Americans on the reservation are dealing with severe Alcoholism. This creates many problems and conflicts. Tayo stabs Emo and then spends some time in a mental facility, While Emo spends time in jail. When Tayo comes back he meets a new medicine man named Betonie. Betonie convinces him that he has to make his own ceremonies. So Tayo sets out to create his own ceremonies. While this is going on Emo is growing angrier and angrier. Emo trys to murder Tayo but Pinkie messes up. Emo then kills Pinkey. Emo escapes to California and is eventually caught.  Tayo meanwhile meets Ts’eh. She teaches him the way of thand the world and about the old traditions. After this the world seems at peace. * Tayo was raised by his Aunt and so his cousin is basically his brother. His uncle was like a father to him

Characters

Tayo- The main protagonist. He Suffers from PTD, alcoholism, Malaria. Bames himself for the drought. He  is caught between white world and Native American world. He is also racist.

Auntie- raised Tayo. Devout Christian

Ts’eh- teaches him the old ways

Betonie- Says that we have to make our own ceremonies instead of trying to fit into someone else’s. He is a bit taboo.

Robert- Uncle , died in a mysterious way. Drives Tayo’s mentall instability

Rocky- Tayo’s cousin , dies as a POW, drives Tayo’s mental instability.

Point of View- The narration is in third person. It is omniscient and fairly reliable.  

Tone- The narrator is upset. The narrator feels conflicted between two worlds.

Imagery- There are several images in this novel. There are several images about the jungle. You can feel the rain and you can hear the rain. Here are images about the drought. You can feel the dryness in your throat and the sand blowing around biting your skin and eyes.

Symbolism-The Gallup Ceremony is a very good symbol of booth how the whites misunderstand the natives and how the natives misunderstand the whites.

Memorable quotes

“Jungle rain had no beginning or end; it grew like foliage from the sky, branching and arching to the earth, sometimes in solid thickets entangling the islands, and, other times, in tendrils of blue mist curling out of coastal clouds. The jungle breathed an eternal green that fevered men until they dripped sweat the way rubbery jungle leaves dripped the monsoon rain. It was there that Tayo began to understand what Josiah had said. Nothing was all good or all bad either; it all depended.” This quote is a really good description of how Tayo felt in the Jungle.

“Old Grandma shook her head slowly, and closed her cloudy eyes again. "I guess I must be getting old, " she said, "because these goings-on around Laguna don't get me excited anymore." She sighed, and laid her head back on the chair. "It seems like I already heard these stories before—only thing is, the names sound different." This is the closing of the book. It shows how the human condition is always the same and just continues the same cycles over and over again.

Theme

We have to make our own “ceremonies” or else we will just fit ourselves into the old cycles and we will not be happy.

How we know: Bettonie instructs Tayo to find his own way, this is how he finds peace also Old Grandma says “It seems like I already heard these stories before—only thing is, the names sound different."








synopsis of Hamlet



Hamlet

Author: Shakespeare

Setting : Elsinore Denmark

Plot: Check this very helpful Sparknotes video http://www.sparknotes.com/sparknotes/video/hamlet  Hamlet is a young man who is returning to Elsinore from college in Germany. He is returning because his father has died and his mother has gotten married. She has married Claudius, Hamlet’s uncle. Hamlet of course feels betrayed by this action. Hamlet learns, from his father’s ghost that Claudius murdered him and Hamlet is instructed to murder Claudius. Hamlet does not fulfill this filial duty until the very end of the play. Throughout the entire play we question who Hamlet really is. We also question who is really on Hamlet’s side and who is against him. I am not really sure about the meaning of this play.

Significant characters

Hamlet- Hamlet is very complicated. There is always more to him than meets the eye.  He is the prince of Elsinore. At the start of the play he is a moody 30 something home from college.  He is the first to find out what happened to his father and vows to kill Claudius.

Gertrude- She is Hamlet’s mother, Claudius’ wife, Hamlet SR.’s wife. It is unclear whether she loves Claudius but it is pretty unclear she did not love Hamlet sr. It is also unclear whether or not she had a hand in her husband’s death. 

Claudius- Claudius murdered his brother either for the love of Gertrude or the more probable he murdered him to get the crown. Claudius has little sympathy. He is also greedy.

The ghost- The ghost appears to Hamlet and really gets the ball rolling as far as the action goes.

Horatio-Hamlet’s closest college friend. In the end he is the only friend Hamlet has

Ophelia- denies Hamlet and this drives over the edge because he feels he is loosing all of his support system

Point of view- There isn’t really a person telling the story. The audience gets most of the news as Hamlet gets the news.

Tone-  This is really hard to peg.  The tone could be angry. The tone could be reminiscent.

Imagery- You get a good image of the ghost. You can really feel the chill of the ghost. Another image is the feelings between Hamlet and Ophelia, Hamlet and his mother and Gertrude and Claudius.

Symbolism- There is not a lot of physical symbols in this show. One really important symbol is the skulls. The skulls represent the coming death and Hamlet’s realization of his own mortality.



Memorable quotes

“That it should come to this!
But two months dead!—nay, not so much, not two:
So excellent a king; that was, to this,
Hyperion to a satyr; so loving to my mother,
That he might not beteem the winds of heaven
Visit her face too roughly. Heaven and earth!
Must I remember? Why, she would hang on him
As if increase of appetite had grown
By what it fed on:”  This shows how high of a platform Hamlet gives to his father. He ignores what his mother wants, what Claudius and even a little of what he wants. Hamlet is very childish.

“Something is rotten in the state of Denmark.”  This is showing how wrong everything has gone since Hamlet Sr. has died.

Theme

The theme is that the future is never certain.

How we know: Hamlet doesn’t know what is going to happen, he doesn’t know what is going to happen. Also the multiple deaths that happen at the end are definitely unexpected.


Synopsis Death of a Salesman





 Death of a Salesman

Author: Arthur Miller

Setting:  Some suburban city, somewhere near NYC probably in the 1970s or 80s.

Plot: After a failed sales trip Willy has returned home where his wife, Linda has been waiting for him. She persuades him to talk to his boss about working in New York so he won’t have to travel. Willy is critical of his son Biff and Linda scolds him. Linda convinces Biff to go to a job interview. Willy reflects upon his life with Biff.  We found out that Biff had been a big football star. He sees his brothers  ghost and we find out that he went west and became successful. The next day Biff goes to his job interview but he ends up stealing from the company. Here we find out that Biff is a kleptomaniac. He tells his father that he steals because he feels he has no other choice and because his father puffed him up to that.   His father gets fired and goes to his friend’s son Bernard. We discover that Bernard has been giving Willy monthly stipends. This is a time when we discover that Willy may not have been as successful as he thinks. Willy and Biff take their father to a bar. Here he find out that Hap has been stealing fiancée. At this point the boys leave and Willy is left to reflect on his life. We find out that Willy has had an affair. The guilt of this and not being able to provide for his family drive Willy to his eventual suicide.

Significant characters

Willy- The central character, is a failed salesperson. Also cannot get over the notion that real work is sealing things and that working with your hands means you are not successful.

Biff- Knows who wants to be but struggles to overcome his father’s ideas.

Hap- The second ignored son, steals fiancées because he has no other means of attention getting,

Linda- is Willy’s wife but is treated more like his mother.  She loves and cares for Willy and her sons but she loves them like her sons.

Bernard- While secondary he supports the family, without them knowing it.

Ben- Willy’s older brother.  Ben is why Willy struggles with his fate so much.

Point of View- This is in third person. The narrator is omniscient. I believe you are supposed to be viewing this play as a neighbor or someone that is an outsider to Willy’s life.  The narrator is mostly reliable.

Tone-The Narrator is angry and perhaps a little pensive.

Imagery- Some important images are, Obviously the Death of Willy, Also the image of the perfect family and the perfect man. 

Symbolism- There are many symbols in this book. One very important one is the family house. As the house falls apart so does Willy and so does the Loman’s marriage. Also as the truck gets forgotten so are Biff and Hap.

Memorable quotes

“I saw the things that I love in this world. The work and the food and the time to sit and smoke. And I looked at the pen and I thought, what the hell am I grabbing this for? Why am I trying to become what I don’t want to be . . . when all I want is out there, waiting for me the minute I say I know who I am.”  This is an example of Biff wondering if he should conform to his Dad’s ideas. This is one place where Biff’s ideas win out. After this he is happier than when he was following his Dad’s idea.



“ A diamond is hard and rough to the touch” This is an instant when Willy struggles with his fate. His brother was clearly successful and he wonders why he can’t be.

Theme

This book is about how capitalism is bad and Miller proves this by arguing that children should not blindly accept their parents believe, and that you have to set your own fate.

How we know: Willy blindly follows and commits suicide, Hap struggles for attention and Biff ends up happier than both his father and his brother.


synopsis PandP

Pride and Prejudice

Author:  Jane Austin

Setting: Neitherfield, England

Plot: The Bennetts who have five unmarried daughters hear that Mr. Bingley is moving into Nietherfield park Mansion.  This is a great cause of excitement as the Bennett property has been enwalled. Also Mrs. Bennett is desperate to see her daughters married. Then there is a dance. At this dance Mr. Bingley brings his friend Mr. Darcy. While Bingley falls for the oldest daughter Jane, Darcy sees Lizzy, the second daughter.  At first he rejects her because she is a lower class citizen. However he soon begins to fall for her.  After a brief illness Mr. Collins comes to court the girls. He eventually purposes to Elizabeth but she refuses him.  We later find out that Mr. Collins marries Lizzy’s best friend Charlotte. Soon a regiment comes to a nearby village. Lydia gets permission to go and stay at an old colonial’s house where she meets Mr. Wickham. She eventually runs away with him.  Mr. Darcy finds out and pays him to marry Lydia.  When Elizabeth sees this she realizes how wonderful he is. In the end Jane marries Bingley and Elizabeth marries Darcy. 

Significant Characters

Elizabeth: Strong , independent , eventually marries Darcy

Darcy: Confident sometimes a little to confident. At first seen as arrogant

Jane: Quiet, “proper” women. Eventually marries Bingley

Mr. Bingley: proper, is easily influenced by Darcy, Marries Jane

Lydia: Slut. Runs away and marries Wickham. She is easily influenced by her overbearing mother.

Point of View:  This is told in third person.  The narrator is omniscient. The narrator is reliable.

Imagery: Once Jane gets sick. Austin does a very good job of describing how Elizabeth gets there and describing what she looks like when she got there. She also does a good showing the Bingley sisters disgust. You can really feel for Elizabeth.

tone: the voice is hopeful

Symbolism: This book is relatively free of symbolism. Perhaps this is because of the amount of dialogue.  One very clear one though is Darcy’s house. Everything about it is a symbol. The river is a direct symbol of Darcy it is not adorned unnecessarily. The house itself is a symbol of Lizzy’s love. Her love for the  house grows as her love for him grows.

Memorable quotes

“It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife.” This is the opening line of the novel. This is part of the reason why Mrs. Darcy is so marriage happy.

“Which do you mean?” and turning round, he looked for a moment at Elizabeth, till catching her eye, he withdrew his own and coldly said, “She is tolerable; but not handsome enough to tempt me; and I am in no humour at present to give consequence to young ladies who are slighted by other men. You had better return to your partner and enjoy her smiles, for you are wasting your time with me.” This is how Darcy first views Elizabeth. Perhaps this would be a good quote to use if you wanted to show that people often change because he ends up marring Elizabeth.

Theme

The message is You should be independent but still follow the rules of society. In this case women should get married.


How I know: Elizabeth has lots of opportunities to marry but she refuses. She thinks for herself and ends up marring Darcy and being much better off than her sisters or her friends. However the feminist in me wonders if she really ends up independent because she still gets married and does not really end “independent”.

Monday, March 5, 2012

synthesis 5 ( critical lenses and litarary periods)


1.       Formalist

2.       New criticism

3.       Reader-response criticism

4.       Deconstruction

5.       Poststructuralist

6.       Postmodernism

7.       Feminist

8.       Dialogic/Bakhtin

9.       Critical discourse analysis


1.       1066-1500 Middle English Period

2.       1500-1600 The Renaissance (Early Modern) Period

3.        1558-1603 Elizabethan Age

4.        1603-1625 Jacobean Age

5.        1625-1649 Caroline Age

6.        1649-1660 Commonwealth Period

7.        1600-1785 The Neo-classical Period

8.        1660-1700 Restoration Period

9.        1700-1745 The Augustan Age

10.    1745-1783 The Age Of Sensibility

11.    1785-1830 The Romantic Period

12.    1832-1901 The Victorian Period

13.    1848-1860 The Pre-Raphaelites

14.    1880-1901 Aestheticism and Decadence

15.    1901-1910 The Edwardian Period

16.    1910-1914 The Georgian Period

17.    1914- The Modern Period

18.    1945- Post Modernism

fourth synthesis ( essays and how to write them)

Kinds of essays and how to write them

1.       The open prompt- the open prompt is an essay that asks you to recall books you have read and analyze the meanings. A few pointers- know a few novels really well. Holmes suggests American Dream and Hamlet. Also use plan text. Do not have run on sentences, or be too wordy. The prompt will remind you of this but do not analyze the story.

2.       The closed prompt- here you have to analyze a piece of work that the AP board will provide. Make sure that you remember DIDLS and use them to answer this question. While in the open prompt you should do that as well it is even more critical here because you have the text right in front of you.  A mistake that I made at the beginning of the year was ignoring some of the text. Do not do this even if it does not for your argument.  When you get the prompt go through whatever they give you and come up with as many examples  of DIDLS as you  can so you have lots of examples.

third class synthesis (plays we have read)

Plays we have read:

The American Dream by Edward Albee: This play is about a married couple. Over time their marriage has deteriorated. At the point in their lives where the play is set both the women and the man have gone completely insane.  Only the girl’s mother has the only hope of being sane. The woman argues with her friends over simple things such as whether a hat is beige or wheat colored. Albee wrote this abstract play in order to show the problems of middle class life.

Death of a Salesman by Arthur Salesman: This play is about a man named Will Lowman. He is a salesman. We are never sure what he sales or if he is even a good salesman. He is always trying to live up to a certain standard. We find this standard to be unachievable. Willy has two sons Biff and Happy. Happy tries to live the same way as his father and Biff has realized that it is not worth it. Willy also has a wife who he treats more as a mother figure than a wife.  In the end Willy’s inability to connect with Biff and Linda, and his inability to “succeed” drive him insane and drive him to commit suicide.

Hamlet by Shakespeare: Hamlet is a young man who is returning to Elsinore from college in Germany. He is returning because his father has died and his mother has gotten married. She has married Claudius, Hamlet’s uncle. Hamlet of course feels betrayed by this action.  Hamlet learns, from his father’s ghost that Claudius murdered him and Hamlet is instructed to murder Claudius. Hamlet does not fulfill this filial duty until the very end of the play. Throughout the entire play we question who Hamlet really is. We also question who is really on Hamlet’s side and who is against him. I am not really sure about the meaning of this play.

second class synthesis ( books we have read)

Books we have read

Ceremony By Silko:  Ceremony is about a young World War 2 veteran Tayo. Tayo has lost almost everything. His brother/cousin has died from Malaria, his favorite uncle has died likely of overwork and dehydration.  Tayo has lost most of his identity. He struggles to find who he is and his place in post-World War 2 America. Also Tayo struggles because he feels responsible for the drought that is happening to the Pueblo people. He struggles with Alcoholism and his lost friends.  Eventually he goes to a healer who tells him that he has to create his own ceremony and forgive himself.  Soon he meets Lazo and she teaches him about the old ways.  And the world begins to be restored to order. In the end his he watches his friends destroy themselves and each other.

Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austin: Pride and Prejudice is about four sisters in Victorian England. Jane the eldest meets her true love, Mr. Bingley at a Dance. They fall deeply in love. Eventually Mr. Darcy questions Jane’s love for Mr. Bingley and he breaks it off with her. Later Mr. Bingley and Jane reunite and get married. While all of this is going on Elizabeth the second child meets Mr. Darcy.  She decides that he is rude because he refuses to dance with her or anyone else for that matter. Overtime Darcy and Elizabeth become closer and closer. At the end of the novel Darcy and Elizabeth get married. The third child Lydia lives with Mr. Wickham. In disgrace she runs off with him. It is a big disgrace for her to run off with him without being married. Soon Darcy pays Wickham off and he marries Lydia.

first class synthesis (Important things to know)

Important things to know:

Diction: The words the author uses

Imagery: anything that appeals to any of your senses

Details:  Specific details that the author uses

Language: unlike diction language is important sentences and phrases.

Syntax: syntax is the way sentences are structured



Voice: The way the author speaks to the reader

Symbolism: among other vocab words this is one of the most important vocab words. Symbols are something that stands in for something else.

Allusions: an allusion is something that alludes to something else. For example the beginning of Hamlet has denial three times and then a rooster crowing. This is an allusion to Peter from the bible denying that he knew Jesus.

open prompt revision 12/4/2011











1978. Choose an implausible or strikingly unrealistic incident or character in a work of fiction or drama of recognized literary merit. Write an essay that explains how the incident or character is related to the more realistic of plausible elements in the rest of the work. Avoid plot summary.

             In Mary Shelly’s Frankenstein there is booth an implausible event and an implausible character.  The character of Frankenstein’s monster is the most implausible character. Mary Shelly uses Frankenstein‘s monster to show that humans ultimately destroy the world.

               First the monster relates to the other characters by being a symbol of evil.  In a moment of Distraught Dr. Frankenstein tries to create new human life but ends up creating a great foe.  Later the monster kills Dr. Frankenstein’s brother. This shows that even when the intention is good the things humans create are destructive. In the end of the novel the Monster asks Frankenstein to make him a wife. Frankenstein refuses and the monster kills Frankenstein’s friend. The more plausible events are the birth and life of humans.  The way that this relates to the other events is when humans play God and create life our creations end up being evil.

                Next the monster relates to other characters by because he is the antagonist. He prevents his creator from of having a clear conscious. This is a symbol of everything Humans create is destructive. Frankenstein cannot shake the feeling that he has done something wrong. He is to blame for his brother’s death and the other deaths caused by the monster. Mary Shelly uses this quilt to create a sense of guilt in the reader.

                Mary Shelly uses the relationship between Frankenstein and his monster to prove that humans are to blame for all destruction. She shows that we as a race should feel guilty and that everything we do will eventually come back to haunt us.

revised 3 10/16/2011 open prompt post



Sunday, October 16, 2011Open Prompt 3 10/16/2011

1973. An effective literary work does not merely stop or cease; it concludes. In the view of some critics, a work that does not provide the pleasure of significant closure has terminated with an artistic fault. A satisfactory ending is not, however, always conclusive in every sense; significant closure may require the reader to abide with or adjust to ambiguity and uncertainty. In an essay, discuss the ending of a novel or play of acknowledged literary merit. Explain precisely how and why the ending appropriately or inappropriately concludes the work. Do not merely summarize the plot.

                Some endings are beautiful while other endings are not.  In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet the ending is the pinnacle of the plot. It is the most crucial part of the entire play. This creates a beautiful perfect ending to show what true love is.

 Shakespeare does a beautiful job of concluding Romeo and Juliet. One sign of a good ending is that all of your questions have been answered. In the end of Romeo and Juliet you know exactly what happens. Also it is a true tragic ending because both the main characters end lower than where they started. They booth die.

Next the ending of Romeo and Juliet proves that they were in love. For Shakespeare True love means that you will do anything to be with that person. Even when your families hate each other, as they do in Romeo and Juliet. In the cases of Romeo and Juliet, Juliet killed herself after realizing that Romeo has killed himself for her. This is the ultimate act of love because they would rather be dead than live without one another.

Finally for Shakespeare true love is a willingness to do anything for another person.  Romeo and Juliet are good examples of what you should do or be willing to do when you love someone.  He seems to be arguing that you should go to the ends of the universe and back for the person you love. He also argues that you should do this despite your situation. In Romeo and Juliet’s case their situation was that their families hated each other. Most people would have found it hard to love each other in such a difficult situation. Romeo and Juliet loved each other despite that.  Shakespeare’s definition of true love is that you would do anything despite outside factors for that person and Romeo and Juliet made the ultimate sacrifice for each other.

                In conclusion Shakespeare creates a perfect ending to show what the meaning of true love is. He argues that love is never ending. He also argues that love should be the end all be all.  Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet has a beautiful perfect ending.






revised open prompt from Sunday, October 30,2011

2008. In a literary work, a minor character, often known as a foil, possesses traits that emphasize, by contrast or comparison, the distinctive characteristics and qualities of the main character. For example, the ideas or behavior of a minor character might be used to highlight the weaknesses or strengths of the main character. Choose a novel or play in which a minor character serves as a foil for the main character. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the relation between the minor character and the major character illuminates the meaning of the work.

Shakespeare often employs foils to prove a point.  In Much Ado About Nothing Claudio and Don Jon are foils. Claudio is almost naïve while Don Jon is sneaky.  Shakespeare uses the relationship between Claudio and Don Jon to show that young  people should think critically about their situation.

First Don Jon and Claudio are foils. We know this because of several things. The first is that Claudio is young and Don Jon is not.  Claudio is merry and Don Jon is gloomy. Claudio is Naïve and Don Jon is manipulative. Shakespeare uses these traits in Claudio to make him easily manipulate able.

Next Shakespeare uses the fact that Claudio is easily manipulated to show that young people should think for themselves.  First Claudio falls deeply in love with Hero. When Don Jon begins spreading rumors about Hero he rejects her. This shows that young people should use common sense because Claudio loves Hero but rejects her to easily.  He does not think about his sources or reflect about the situation.  He allows others to make decisions for him and this ultimately leads to his unhappiness. Shakespeare uses Claudio as an example for other young people. 

In conclusion Shakespeare uses the relationship between Don Jon and Claudio to show that young people should think for themselves. Claudio is easily manipulated and this ultimately leads to his destruction. 






revised open prompt from September

2009, Form B. Many works of literature deal with political or social issues. Choose a novel or play that focuses on a political or social issue. Then write an essay in which you analyze how the author uses literary elements to explore this issue and explain how the issue contributes to the meaning of the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot.

                Poverty was a major problem for England in the late 1800s. People who lived in poverty often faced cruelties such as work houses, living on the streets and constantly not having enough to eat. In Dickens  A Christmas Carol Dickens uses the varies characters such as Tiny  Tim his partner Jacob Marley and Scrooges   treatment of Bob Cratchit as implements to prove these cruelties.  Dickens uses Tiny Tim and other various characters to convince the upper classes of 19th century England that they should help the poor.

Tiny Tim in A Christmas Carol shows the danger of treating people poorly. Scrooge does not treat his employee well. Because of this Cratchet cannot buy nice things for his family. He also cannot get care for his disabled son.  Due to this the people of the town dislike Scrooge. Scrooge is treated the same way he treats other people.  Dickens uses Tiny Tim and the rest of the Cratchet family to argue what goes around comes around.

The ghosts in A Christmas Carol show that the upper class should treat the lower classes better.  The ghost of Christmas future shows Scrooge his own funeral. People are celebrating his death.  This shows that he should treat the lower class better because he will be treated better. Dickens seems to be arguing that upper class people should treat people in a lower class better because they will be treated well. It also means that they will be better respected.

                In Dickens A Christmas carol Scrooge learns about caring for others. Dickens uses Scrooge to show what will happen to people if they do not treat other people in a good way. He uses Tiny Tim to demonstrate what will happen if we the upper classes did not treat the poor the way he thought that the poor should be treated.